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« Thread Started on Jun 26, 2008, 4:21am »

Name: Kara
Breed: White Tigeress/Griffen (Go concult DC dragon chronicles)
Gender: Female
Loyalty: Neutral
Picture:

Coat Color: Pure as snow white with black stripes as black as night.
Eye Color: Purple with shards of peridot mixed in.
Size: Six feet and Five inches and slender
Personality: She has a wise look on things and is ruthless unless befriended and if done she'll have their back.

Histoy: She has lived in the neutral land keeping a look from afar in the skies mostly to see of any intruders. She loves the sky and has a daydream of sorts of just living in the air. She perches in mountains, but has gotten use to this area.

Auditioning Piece: She was flying around the border of the area which she always did. At that very moment her body was hidden behind a cloud and was resting on the snowy white cloud and keeping herself aloft. She dipped her pure head out of the clouds and her white and black head was miniscle compared to the ones on the ground. She saw a group down below hoping that it wasn't intruders, cause she wasn't in a fighting mode. She would however go and challenge there logics. She pulled her head out of the cloud with somewhat of a ruff of cloud sticking around her neck.

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Kara S/F/G White Tiger Griffon

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Re: Oria
« Reply #1 on Jun 26, 2008, 9:08pm »

OOC: I don't mean to be picky, but I am. I will look at this again once you have used spell check. Also, please use their, they're, and there correctly. Once you do so, I will accept.

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Arikara~F~N~Cub
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Re: kara
« Reply #2 on Jul 3, 2008, 1:02pm »

What abot now? is it any better or should i just bail/delete it and try again? Let me know soon.
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Re: kara
« Reply #3 on Jul 20, 2008, 4:25pm »

OOC: Yes, it's fine now thank you. But I can't accept it next time unless you use spell check.

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Re: kara
« Reply #4 on Jul 21, 2008, 1:46am »

This is what i'm trying to get across about what kind of Character I am trying to make Kara. However i found only ONE word taht was mispelt and i changed it.

This is whata Griffen is:
Griffen-
These are the large cat like breed and they are very wise and intellegent. They love high places.

Hopefully this will get across what i'm trying to make Kara.
Let me know if ur still confused.

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Kara S/F/G White Tiger Griffon

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Re: kara
« Reply #5 on Jul 21, 2008, 8:32am »

I do know what a griffon is.
There was just another thing you were trying to make a character before that I didn't know what it was. I do know what a griffon is so no worries.

And thanks for using spell check, please make sure to use it always now.

She is accepted.

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Arikara~F~N~Cub
Capear~M~N~Single
Chesapeake~M~G~Single
Elise~F~E~Karuk Natane
Gracious~F~G~Single

Owner:

Oldest Daughter:
Angel

Youngest Son:
Saber

Arikara is born.
She is the chosen one and has the power of the lands before us. She is oblivious to these powers, Chesapeake and Karuk Natane though are not. They wish to take her power for their loyalties, Karuk Natane wishes to take the land for good and Chesapeake wishes to save the land from Karuk. Your life's destiny awaits you.